I feel like one of the things that let down some of my images is the text.
I find it really difficult to come up with different ways to draw letters.
Simone also told me it wasn't always clear who exactly is talking in some of my images so I thought about giving them a bit more character and playing around with speech bubbles/marks etc. though I haven't gotten too far yet because this one took ages to fill in...
I tried straightening it out with photoshop but I don't know if it looks as nice..
But yeah, not the most adventurous of tests but I'll keep trying, people in my class like Jon Bliss make me feel guilty for not using more interesting typography... Tsch.
I think I need to break up my pages and not have portraits on every single one..
I've drawn this using black ink but I'm generally thinking about the image in terms of making sure it's a good template for printing. I did loads of colour tests but then photoshop decided to close so will just upload the favourite one.